Edit

So far so good. The min bulk of the editing is complete and I'm happy with how it sounds. The frying onions work really well as rain, and as we begin with this it really sets the mood. Though I think it isn't that clear that it is set in a city that has just brought down a dystopian regime and is now in a bit of a mess, it certainly sounds like a city in ruins.. which I think is more or less the same thing..

Now all that is left to do is refine every aspect, ensuring that we have equal sounds on right and left speakers and they fade in and out appropriately, to effectively convey that our character is walking through streets.